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Monday, June 26, 2017

My crocodile # 1

Hi guys!
Today I'm going to show you one of my stories after playing a game called game of awesome.

 The crocodile
Chapter 1
The fire

It was 12:30 and I was in bed.
Kaboom! Huh!? I looked out my window. There were gray clouds.
I jumped out of bed and raced down stairs.
I slowly opened the door. I saw smoke near a bridge on my favorite river.
“Ah!’’I screamed. I ran back inside,
grabbed a few buckets of water and rushed out to save the bridge.
Snap! Snap! . . .

 chapter 2 is coming soon!
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 7, 2017 at 11:54 AM

    I like the start to your story. Looks cool.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 31, 2017 at 1:52 PM

    I'm enjoying the story and i cant wait to be able to read chapter 2.Thanks for sharing your story.

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