Simple, Compound, and Complex sentences! Reading W3

Hello world

In our writing workshop we were learning about sentences. there are three different types of sentences: simple, compound, and complex.

We had to change this Instruction from bad to good and if you can use simple, compound, and complex sentences.

bad Instructions:

Put your socks on your feet. Put your shoes on your feet. Cross your laces. Take one of your ends and put it through the hole. Tighten it. Take 1 lace. Fold the lace into a bunny ear. Take your lace that is not in a bunny ear and wrap it around the bunny ear once. Take that lace that you just wrapped look through the hole there is a lace pull it through. Tighten it. Cross your 2 bunny ears. Pull one ear through the tiny hole at the bottom. Pull again to tighten. 

My Instructions:

♦ ♦ ♦ HOW TO TIE YOUR SHOELACE ♦ ♦ ♦

♦ Firstly crouch down with one knee hold the top of your sock.

♦ Then Place your toe inside the sock and pull the sock up toward you.

♦ Next take your shoe and place your toe in.

♦ Grab the end of the laces and make an X.

♦ After that take one end of the lace and put it through the hole.

♦ Then pull the laces in opposite ways to tighten it.

♦ Take one lace and fold it into a bunny ear.

♦ Next Take your lace that is not a bunny ear and wrap around the bunny ear once.

♦ Look through the bunny ear, you should see a lace.

♦ Take the lace and pull it through and Tighten it.

♦ Make an Cross with the two bunny ears and pull one ear through the tiny hole at the bottom.

♦ (optional) Pull once more to tighten it.