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Tuesday, June 27, 2017

My crocodile # 2

Hi guys chapter 2 is here!

The crocodile


Chapter 2
What was that?

Splash! Splash! I the fire was almost out.‘‘Hay! Can I Help!”
said someone nearby.
He (or she) sounded A little bit different. ‘‘Who’s that?’’
I called. A crocodile stepped in front of me and said
hey’’ Run it's a specking crocodile! I ran screaming
“no wait come back!’’ said the crocodile.
‘‘I didn't mean it’’ said the crocodile
‘‘oh and by the way my name is Ben!’’

Chapter 3 is coming soon!

3 comments:

  1. Great start to chapter 2. I like how you have at least one post about one chapter.

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  3. Hey chris my name is Daniel and I from St Francis of Assisi school I like your work keep It up I liked the bit where you put in i went screaming
    Keep it up. 10/10

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Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.

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