My Writing (still in progress)

THE RUN

To day I was going to steal the core gem.

It was  My secret path to my vehicles. The shortcut leed to my garage. When I arrived to my garage I got out my porsche out ''This is more like it'' I hoped in. I raped my fingers around the steering wheel, slammed down the right pedal and race on the road. bolt was in the back sleeping. (It was his favorite place to sleep) After a couple of minutes later the police came. ''Stop right there!'' seid one of the cop's. Up ahead there was trafic. oh! no! I thought. I was trapped! We were getting closer and closer. So I did a u turn and headed for the cops. the cops One cop said ''hey!'' We were going to crash!! I pressed a red button and my car made a big hole on the car's roof. Then suddenly the seat was flying with me. I landed on a tramp then I jumped up on the roof and started to head down . It was hard with the chimneys and Very loose bricks. I didn't think I'll go that far. I was all most there. The police started to shoot at me they even followed me with their cars. Pew! Pew! They hit a brick and I slipped! ''Ahhh'' I said as I fell. I got knocked out.

I woke up and saw the people with tattoos and strong people, then an old wise man. ''In here'' said The Soldier I got thrown into prison again. It will be hard to get out with all the soldiers surrounding the place. It was all most bolt's breakfast. He's going to be dead by the time I'll be back. Meanwhile at home bolt was running dog play area where he gets his food, but not his time. 

(still in progress)

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swimming

HI I'm Christopher

I've bean doing swimming for 7 years. I started when I was 5 and I'm 11 now so that means I've bean doing it 

For two weeks our school has been swimming at QE11. There were three groups, Group one, Group, two, and Group three, If you were confident at swimming four lengths (100 meters) easy then you go in group three, but I knew it was going to be harder than that. four or five people were confident and went, and the rest stayed with me. 

The people who stayed had to do an test if you fail you go in to the first group, and if you pass you go in the second group. I Jumped in it was freezing but I swam through the cold water ''Go in the second lane'' They said to me so I made it in to the second lane. The test was easy we has to do freestyle for one length (25 meters) I passed. The second lane was not too easy and a little hard. A few weeks later we did some challenging stuff. Four lengths of freestyle, four lengths of backstroke and two lengths of breaststroke all without kicking only arms nonstop! Then another two lengths of breaststroke with kicking and arms nonstop!!

Do you think that swimming 250 meters with no arms is hard?

bye!