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My learning goal was to write a good recount with correct punctuation and interesting detail.
In the holiday . . .In the holiday my Dad said ''Tomorrow we're going to . . . '' I was wondering what he was going to say '' . . . The movies tomorrow '' The next day we looked at my dad's computer, He went to the Hoyts website to see what movies are available. Then we decided to see the Lego Ninjago movie. Me and Julian love Lego and we have a lot of loges to play with.We hopped in my dad's blue car to go to the Hoyts cinema. The trip was not that long, it took us half an hour. when we arrived there we got out of the car and into the mall. We saw a shop that said Yogurt Story. We turned right and found an escalator that goes up to the movies (Hoyts) and we went up.We went into the queue and bought three tickets, one for me, one for my dad, and one for my brother. We went out of the queue then down the escalator, went shopping for thirty minutes then came back up. We bought an extra large popcorn and a large Seven Up drink. Julian was holding the tickets as we were walking past the wide hallway. I was excited.On the left there was a black door that has a big number one on it. We opened it. behind the door was an another hallway but it was darker but finally the enormous theater appeared on the left. We rushed up the steps to our seats which has numbers. The seats were red, comfortable with two cup holders, one on each side. Suddenly the lights turned off. We're going to see the Lego ninjago movie. Some other trailers went on the screen like the Emoji movie and the Captain Underpants one too. Then it was Ninjago movie. The movie was a bit long, but just enough to finish the popcorn and the drink.My favorite bit of the movie was when Garmadon attacked the city the two Lego figures screamed ''garmadon!'' then the baby screamed ''garmadon!'' too. I enjoyed this movie and my day a lot.
The End
Have you seen this movie and do you like?
My learning goal was to write a good recount with correct punctuation and interesting detail.
In the holiday . . .In the holiday my Dad said ''Tomorrow we're going to . . . '' I was wondering what he was going to say '' . . . The movies tomorrow '' The next day we looked at my dad's computer, He went to the Hoyts website to see what movies are available. Then we decided to see the Lego Ninjago movie. Me and Julian love Lego and we have a lot of loges to play with.We hopped in my dad's blue car to go to the Hoyts cinema. The trip was not that long, it took us half an hour. when we arrived there we got out of the car and into the mall. We saw a shop that said Yogurt Story. We turned right and found an escalator that goes up to the movies (Hoyts) and we went up.We went into the queue and bought three tickets, one for me, one for my dad, and one for my brother. We went out of the queue then down the escalator, went shopping for thirty minutes then came back up. We bought an extra large popcorn and a large Seven Up drink. Julian was holding the tickets as we were walking past the wide hallway. I was excited.On the left there was a black door that has a big number one on it. We opened it. behind the door was an another hallway but it was darker but finally the enormous theater appeared on the left. We rushed up the steps to our seats which has numbers. The seats were red, comfortable with two cup holders, one on each side. Suddenly the lights turned off. We're going to see the Lego ninjago movie. Some other trailers went on the screen like the Emoji movie and the Captain Underpants one too. Then it was Ninjago movie. The movie was a bit long, but just enough to finish the popcorn and the drink.My favorite bit of the movie was when Garmadon attacked the city the two Lego figures screamed ''garmadon!'' then the baby screamed ''garmadon!'' too. I enjoyed this movie and my day a lot.
The End
Have you seen this movie and do you like?
nice chris
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ReplyDeleteGreat to hear you've a learning goal. I really reading your story.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Hayun.
ReplyDeleteI went to watch Despicable me 3 too on the holidays!
Hey Christopher, you made a mistake on The holidays, it’s on the second sentence, that’s because you didn’t needed to put another tomorrow because when your dad said in the start he said tommorow, it means we already know that your going to the movies tomorrow!
Wow and also great project you made (with your friend).
Christopher I got a question, What clothes did you wore on book character day?
No, I didn't watch those movies
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