THE RUN
To day I was going to steal the core gem.
It was My secret path to my vehicles. The shortcut leed to my garage. When I arrived to my garage I got out my porsche out ''This is more like it'' I hoped in. I raped my fingers around the steering wheel, slammed down the right pedal and race on the road. bolt was in the back sleeping. (It was his favorite place to sleep) After a couple of minutes later the police came. ''Stop right there!'' seid one of the cop's. Up ahead there was trafic. oh! no! I thought. I was trapped! We were getting closer and closer. So I did a u turn and headed for the cops. the cops One cop said ''hey!'' We were going to crash!! I pressed a red button and my car made a big hole on the car's roof. Then suddenly the seat was flying with me. I landed on a tramp then I jumped up on the roof and started to head down . It was hard with the chimneys and Very loose bricks. I didn't think I'll go that far. I was all most there. The police started to shoot at me they even followed me with their cars. Pew! Pew! They hit a brick and I slipped! ''Ahhh'' I said as I fell. I got knocked out.
I woke up and saw the people with tattoos and strong people, then an old wise man. ''In here'' said The Soldier I got thrown into prison again. It will be hard to get out with all the soldiers surrounding the place. It was all most bolt's breakfast. He's going to be dead by the time I'll be back. Meanwhile at home bolt was running dog play area where he gets his food, but not his time.
(still in progress)
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Bye
Hi Chris im Ethan B from Marshland school. I really liked the part about the cops and they interacted with the character. Think you should a part when the main character goes to jail and escapes. And you did an amazing job on your story. By the way Im writting a story im going to post the the story on my blog. From Ethan J Buckland
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