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Tuesday, September 17, 2019

My Narrative on the future (Rising)

Hi,


We (our hub) all did a narrative on the future In this blog I will show you mine. Mine is about
Climate change. Here is mine!

Rising

Rising, The water was rising up to my feet. Half the city was gone and probably the
population as well. My glowing space house with holographic windows had sunk, same
with all most every other things in the area. My Dad saved me, but he could not save him-self.
He got stuck and drowned in R5-60 (a space truck) The energy shield lever got jammed and
the water slipped in and he could not breathe. It was just me and my Mum but she might be
dead too cause she's at work. Everyone fled out of their homes, some broke the windows and
climbed on the glowing rooftops as I ran to the highest thing in the distance, Crying. Tears
rolled down from my face and dripping down onto the rocky Ground. ''Up there!!'' said a
man with a blue top. ''Drop your nuts and move your butts!'' called someone behind me.
Everyone was running like little ants, scattered everywhere shouting and crying.


A bit later when a couple of us made it up the mountain, I noticed that the water was far
Behind, same with the others. ''Is everyone ok?'' asked a woman.
''Yeah, but I'm cold'' responded someone climbing the last little bit of the mountain.
In the meantime a group who were Highly trained Robots with snow copers and E7-Gloves
(Glove that heat up your hand and they have special fabric for better grip) to go to
antarctica and move Ice and slide it in a capin and cover it up so the sun doesn't melt it, and
make more water so the world won't sink. The water felt like it had stopped. We were lucky
because maybe in two or three hours the water would have been at my knees. It had been a
while when a shadow came floating to us. It looked like a boat so we yelled ''hey! over here!''
There was no response ''help! please, up here!'' but as it came closer it got clearer and we
could see it. It was shaped like a cube drifting along the water. I ran down the hill. ''No, Stop
you'll slip!'' I heard someone say behind me. I got down to the water and grabbed a stick and
started to pull it closer.


''Yeah! ha! ha!'' They said they came and helped me get it to higher ground. We opened the
crate that was wrapped with rope and found this: a fishing rod, a small log, a bucket and
some extra hooks. We disassembled the box and got some extra wood. We built a raft and
tied it up with the rope that once tied the box. The water had been rising. We put our new
stuff on the raft and padded along the sea. There were floating cars, wood, and other junk.
We padded with our freezing hands along the sea that had felt like it never ended. ''ahhh!''
''quiet!'' there was someone or something in the distance. ''Did you hear that?'' I asked
''woah!'' There it goes again. '' It was like the sound of someone ''We need to do something,
and quick!'' I seid as we all paddled x100 times faster. ''where are you??'' I asked.
''In . .   ahh! t-the car'' We all heard it and we turned around and saw an old silver car
half drowning in the water. ''Please!'' ''Don't worry were here!'' I yelled. He looked cold in
his wet wite uniform. We pulled him out of the water and onto the boat. I thought that he
was a scientist. ''are you a scientist??'' I asked ''uh, huh that's right!'' He answered,
''how did you survive for that long?!?'' We asked ''simple, with this!'' he said pulling out
a small little bubble like object. ''wow! nice can I see?'' I said ''sure! here,'' he answered
with a smile. ''Wait a minute, can you make a bigger one for us? I have a plan!'' I asked
''Well. . . It will be hard and I need some things to make it'' he answered
''Ok we'll find them!'' ''ok!!'' let's go!


We paddle to the mountain and put the scientist there. ''Thank you so much'' He said,
''Don't worry your safe now'' ''so what do you need for your bubble thing?''
''well I need this: some steel, eght nails and an Iphone.''
''sure! wait why do you need a phone?''
''Oh because I will break it and use some of the parts!'' he said ''Ok then let's go!'' I said
as I hopped on the raft. We suam to the silver car that the scientist had lived in and grabbed
a nearby stick and started to whack the car until a silver shard of steel flinged off the car.
The next is object: Nails. We used the steel as an ore and paddled to a table and got the nails
we swam back to the hill (That was no longer a hill) and gave the things to him.
''here'' I said, ''Thanks but where is the phone?'' ''Oh you can have mine!'' I answered
''thank you very much boy'' he said We disassembled my phone and the scientist did
his part: making the big bubble.


After a while when the water was getting higher and higher I went to go check on the
David The Scientist. ''There I finished it'' He said ''Wow sweet! Thanks'' I said  you're
welcome he said as he reached out his hand to give it to me. ''May I ask a question?''
said David ''Sure!'' I said ''What will you use this for?'' Asked David ''Oh this! I'll show
just come here!'' I said as we walked to the water I jumped in the bubble and rolled into
the water ''see?'' I said ''wow! you are a smart boy my friend'' I dived down and landed
on the soft warm sand and built a little hut and swam back up. ''Come down here we
can build a city under water!'' I said
''hey that's a great Idea!'' said David ''Come down and help me, The survivors can come
here to!'' I said 
''let me get my ball!'' he said as I rolled down in to my hut. I Had made some changes to
my base like stronger walls and more rooms. ''Hi'' said David as he hit the bouncy
bubble with his hands. after a while there was about thirty to forty houses surrounded
by Junk. me and David floated up to the Surface and had a long break with the others.
''I'm a bit hungry'' I moaned as I fell down on the cold hard floor.
''Me two'' he said '' Me three'' said someone I looked back and the others
''where were you?'' they said ''well. . . um . . we made little huts in the bottom of the sea'' I said

'' YOU WHAT?!? AND HOW COULD YOU EVEN DO THAT!?!?'' ''We used this'' I said
we all swam down and when fishing. Then . . . well it was our new home.



THE END

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