Writing Week 8

Hi

This is a story that I have wrote.

My D.L.O:

STORM

ZAP! ''Whoa'' screams Will as he slipped and fell on the hard stone floor. ''Are you ok? That storm really does not want to leave!'' says Nick. ''yeah, I'm good'' answers Will. Nick glanced through the window and at the storm, in the corner of his eye was a A dark shadow. The mysterious shadow was running towards a mountain then it disappeared. ''Did you see that?'' yells Nick as he placed his hands on the window. Will got up from the floor ''see what?'' he said as he rushed over. The shadow appeared again ''Over there!'' he pointed to a shadow on the mountain in the distance. ZAP! the lightning struck again they both looked at the mountain where the shadow one was. ''It's gone'' said Will. They were standing there with their mouths wide open. Nick ran Down stairs and into a big dark room. ''Nick, are you doing what I think you're doing?'' asked Will as he followed ''Well what are you thinking about? I'm just gonna save that well . . I don't know what it is, from that storm!'' replied Nick. Nick turned the lights. in the room there was a massive door-like strusher and two objects with a black soft cloth on top of both of them. ''Which one?'' asked Will ''How about the Giant one?'' suggested Nick ''Alright!'' yelled Will as he yanked the black soft sheet off the object. Underneath appeared a massive truck with really Thick wheels the size of a regular car! Nick jumped in and grabbed the leather wheel ''Come on Will!'' called Nick. Will hoped on. Will pressed a button then there was a loud noise. The giant door opened and Nick raced through the door and into the storm. ''UP THERE!''said Will pointing up to the mountain. The engine was roaring like a lion in a zoo. ''HERE WE GO!'' yelled Nick as he stomped on the pedal. They were speeding up the mountain, Well they were speeding up the mountain when the engine had started to make some odd noises. BONK! CLANK! RATTLE! ''Um . . Nick? . . I think something is wrong with the engine'' ''yeah'' said Nick. They started to slowly go backwards. ''Why are you going backwards'' asked Will. Nick was confused ''I'm not'' he said. '' WHAT DO YOU MEAN?!? yelled Will in terror. Then they went faster and faster and the ground became full of lumps and bumps. ''AHHHH!!!'' They both screamed as they were bouncing like bouncy balls all throughout the car. They had finally come to a standstill. With the last of Will's energy he opened the door and rolled out onto the cold muddy floor. Nick rolled out with his hands on his head. He was walking but just not straight. ''I'm dizzy'' he said. ''Nick, I don't remember you wearing dark clothes'' said Will ''What? . . No you're wearing that black outfit'' said Nick. Then an unknown voice whispered from the bushes. ''What are you doing here? it to dangerous!'' ''AHHH a ghost!'' screamed Will. ''AHHH three ghosts!!'' called Nick. ''It's just one ghost Nick!'' said Will as he got up the muddy dirt.

To be continued. . . . .

Question:

What do you thing will happen?

Can you give me ideas on what could happen?

Bye!