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Thursday, July 23, 2020

Writing - Hansel and Gretel - Week 1 - Term 3

Hello Friends!


Here is my Writing Task

Smell

The great smell drifted off the sweet cooke house and caught the attention of Hansel and Gretel.


The wonderful scent of the house traveled through the forest and met Hansel and Gretel.


The sweet scent of the candy glided passed the tall trees and stopped and Gretel and Hansel noses. Their eyes widened with wonder.

Wait

They crouched down beside a bush and froze, Waiting in silence.


They silently hid behind the bush examining the strange house.


They were almost invisible when they were hidden in the bushes.

Similes

The forest was a dark muddy place that stretched as far as the eye could see.


The old trees were as tall as a skyscraper.


Long vines wrapped around the trees and plants around Hansel and Gretel.


I Really do hope you like it.
I you have any questions or thoughts please share then in the comment section.
For now goodbye!

1 comment:

  1. Hi this is Dejon good story keep up the good work :)

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Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.

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